segunda-feira, 27 de outubro de 2008

Oh! Don't say the L word...

Nunca antes disto me tinha passado pela cabeça tentar escrever um episódio de uma série. Há uma primeira vez para tudo. O próximo tem mais cenas, prometo...


THE L WORD SEASON 6 EPISODE ONE


BEFORE CREDITS:


Morning.

A long-haired bold young woman talks to Bette on the phone confirm a consultation for someone else. We see the blond woman leaving a car and talking to Bette on the phone.

Danielle: Ok. I’ll see her at seven. Hope she’ll be here on time, because I’ve the opening at the gallery. Oh! Are you and Tina coming?

Bette (at CU): Yes, we’ll be there. I’m so excited for you. Me and Tina can’t wait for tonight.

CREDITS

FIRST SCEENE AFTER CREDITS:


Lunch.

Kit, Helena and Jenny are at the Planet. Kit is filling Helena in on what she missed after she had gone to England accompanying Peggy after she left the hospital.

Helena: So, how’s Shane?
Jenny: Oh… She’s actually seeing a shrink today
Helena: What?
Kit: She’s finally admitted she has serious issues. And Bette has an artist friend of hers who’s also a psychologist seeing her today.
Helena: Oh. The one that’s showing today at the CAC?
Jenny: yes. Are you going? I’m going, and so are Alice, and Bette and Tina.
Kit: Guess the gang will all be there.

SCEENE TWO
Late afternoon.

Shane is sitting on a couch at the psychologist’s office. The assistant had her come in.
Danielle enters. She is wearing a skirt suite with shirt. She looks fabulous and very professional. Shane notices that, but she is in a totally screwed up state of mind to feel desire.

Danielle: Hello. You must be Shane. Nice to meet you, I’m Danielle Waters. – They shake hands and Danielle takes a seat. Shane seats down on a white comfortable sofa, pointed at by Danielle. - So, what brings you here?
Shane hesitating: hum… I guess... I just … I need to figure out why I keep screwing up my relationships with everyone.
Danielle: What relationships do you mean?
Shane: God… That’s a long story.
Danielle: That’s why you’re here right? So get started, Shane.

Camera moves above Danielle’s head focusing on the framed photograph with the words: Know Yourself.

SCEENE THREE
Back at the Planet, after lunch, the girls are having coffee.
Helena is still catching up on current events with Kit and Jenny.

Jenny: Hey Helena. What about Annabelle? She’s meeting us here later on. You know, she is quite an amazing person, once you get to know her. And she is so beautiful… I really like her.
Jenny: That’s great, because I was actually thinking about casting her for a part on our series.
Kit: What? What’s going on you guys? What series are you talking about?
Helena: Oh! That’s right! I forgot to tell you! Me, Tina and Jenny decided to create our own production company.
Kit: Oh that’s great girl! But how about the Planet and SheBar? Are you going to be able to manage all of these businesses at the same time?
Helena: Oh! No… Actually Kit, I’ve been meaning to come to talk to you about this. I have all these businesses now, and the Peabody Foundation, and mother’s businesses to run. But I won’t be able to do all this at the same time so I decided to put the most capable people ahead of some of these businesses.
Kit: Oh…
Helena: I was kind of hoping that you would be able to take SheBar out of my hands, and … (Smiling at Kit) I had papers drawn to put the Planet entirely in your name.
Kit: What!?! Girl….. That’s amazing!!! (Hugs her) Oh! Bette is going to be so thrilled about this!!

SCEENE FOUR

Alice and Tasha are making love at candle light on the floor of what later the camera reveals to be their new home.
No dialogue is needed. We can see the house is bear and they have a blanket on the floor. There is a stereo and boxes scattered around everywhere. There are a lot of painting and construction materials and the girls lay on the blanket touching and kissing each other.
Alice’s phone alarm rings.
Alice: hey Tash (in a very soft voice) It’s time. We should get going…
Tasha: Yeah… I guess we just have to pick up from here when we come back. (Gives Alice a cute look and kisses her tenderly).

SCEENE FIVE

At Danielle’s office.

Danielle: So, do you think that Jenny stopped caring for you because of what you and Nikki done?
Shane (in a low sad voice): I guess she is mostly hurt. And I did that to her. And God knows I’m sorry. I’m a screw up. And I surely don’t deserve her friendship. I swear I want to make up to her.
Danielle: Wouldn’t you say that this is a good way to start making emends with the past? Do you feel that you really want to change?
Shane (decidedly): I’m sure. That’s why I came here.
Danielle: That’s good. Very good. I guess we are out of time. Do you want to schedule another session?
Shane: Definitely.
Danielle: My assistant isn’t here past seven, but I’ll write this down. Next week?
Shane: No. can’t I come twice a week?
Danielle: Sure. I’ll have to be going. I have my opening at the CAC.
Shane: Oh! Is that you today? I’m going with Bette and Tina.
Danielle: Oh. Ok. Guess I’ll see you later then.
Shane: wait. Is this ok? … I mean, professionally…?
Danielle: I think so. It’s just an exhibition, right?

SCEENE SIX

At the CAC.

The whole gang is there having fun, drinking. Bette and Tina approach Shane and Alice who are observing a photo.
Bette: hey.
Tina: hey guys.
Alice and Shane: Hey!!
Tina: Danielle’s great, isn’t she?
Bette to Shane: What do you think about her?
Shane: She’s great.
Tina: She’s gorgeous. And straight.
Bette: kind of… some friends think she goes both ways.
Alice: Good for her.
Bette: so, how did it go?
Shane: It went well. She’s nice, I guess.

Tasha and Helena are standing in front of a framed photograph admiring a naked female body, while the camera goes around the group scattered around the room.

SCEENE SEVEN

At Bette and Tina’s house. End of the night.
Bette and Tina are by the pool kissing. There are candles lit around them and they are involved in mutual caresses.
Bette goes down on Tina and after Tina comes she finger fucks Bette until they come together.


End of episode one.

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